Pillow Look

(original above, "fixed" below)

I didn't like this at first, but - I don't have anything else to post today (I say to all of you who are not looking).

On a second look, it hit me very squarely what the problem was:

#1 - her eye was off, too close to the mid-line and too large.

#2 - I was crimped for space in drawing the sweeps of her hair because of the stupid small-sized sketchbook I am using. Couldn't do a LOT about #2, but I could fix #1. Hair's still off... but I think it's much better.